Tuesday, 18 October 2011

Llangwyn






Llangwyn

The lane was fringed with grasses and 
the frank gaze of speedwell
bold and open as a child’s stare.
Tiny butterflies wavered by your face
and because the grass,
alive with leaping insects, slapped and stung your knees,
you stepped between two dusty wheel-tracks,
where tussocks brushed the car.
           
Those days the sky held too much light,
the colour leached, the distances exposed.
Half the fields were butter-yellow slabs,
their hedges dark and heavy with birds.
Summer, still and warm, left ewes
ragged in half moulted wool; the lambs grown 
fat with their first coat.

The lane came to nothing at the meadow’s southern edge,
peppered with mole-hills and the droppings of sheep. 
Flies, the colour of cowshit, pestered us
and a band of dusty sheep, gasping in tree-shadow,
cracked the quiet valley with their bleating,
wary of the dog. 
We paused in shade and looked –
tiny freckles had floated slowly to the surface
of our skin.
And there you saw them, tiny glowing coals,
shy in the hedgerow’s dim - the strawberries;
destined for this long hot day,
the touch of your small fingers,
the press of your parched tongue.

Back to the house
we spoke of cups of water
and crayons
and Daddy coming home. 

6 comments:

  1. What a beautiful poem!

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  2. Is this poem set in Llangwyn, Heyope? If so I live there. I sort of recognise the house in the photo but im not quite sure. The poem reminds me of the fields and woods around here to. Tim

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  3. Thank you Jenny! So good to receive comments.

    Tim, yes, it IS Llangwyn, Heyope and we lived there for a few years. My daughter was born while we were there. We rented it from the Lloyds (Cleobury Farm). How great that you should find this and contact me! I am so pleased to finally get to know who's there now!
    We were the ones who knocked down the wall in the sitting room to reveal the most amazing fireplace with the elm beam. The whole thing started when I looked inside a cupboard to the right of the fireplace and noticed the end of the elm beam! I said that there must be a fireplace behind the wall and asked if we could reveal it. We, helped by John and his fiancee Gwynneth, knocked down a concrete wall to get at it! Hard work! John (Lloyd) built the stone fireplace inside it for us so we could attach our wood burner. We also revealed the post and panel wall in the kitchen which was hidden behind an ORANGE wall of some sort of composite wood stuff! We think it's 17th century or possibly earlier.
    Anyway, I thought you'd like the hear about that!
    The photograph I took years ago from inside Llangwyn Wood. There were two old barns up by the house then, but they're not visible in this photo.
    Thanks for getting in touch!

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  4. I have been living here for just over a year now amd I have to say it really is a magical place. Yes I think your right, apparently the site of the house goes back even further as it was supposed to be where a guard house for Knucklas castle was sited. How amazing that those features were ever hidden! Your poem has now been printed out and pinned to the wall in the kitchen. If your ever passing feel free to pop in for a cup of tea!

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  5. Thanks Tim! We will certainly take you up on your offer. I'm very pleased that you like the poem...I think it's right where it should be!

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  6. Incidentally, my short story, 'Flowers for Mary' (also in this Blog)was partly set in Llangwyn, as you can see from the photograph which goes with it.

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